Through the Telescopes Lens

Subject: Through the Telescopes Lens Thu May 01, 2008 2:57 pm

Through The Telescopes Lens
By Bane

The Story-
Collin Starfish is a adventurous young penguin who loves to build boats and sail them out to the iceberg with his collection of Telescopes that once belonged to his father. As he sailed of to the iceberg one day with his prized silver telescope he caught a glimpse of something far of in the horizon...

Chapter 1- On the horizon.

[camera pan of into the horizon of the ocean, in sight is ship shaped, dark blur. Behind which are storm clouds brewing.]
Collin: ''Oh my...I wonder if that storm will pass over here...''
[Collin puts down his telescope and grabs an ore from the side of him, he starts to paddle back to shore]

[Meanwhile far of into the storm a wrecked ship slowly sinks as another, larger, ship sails beside it, a penguin stands at the side of the larger ship with a grin on his face, as on the sinking ship another kneels injured.]
???: So you think your so smart now that your ship has sank, Marzon!
[Marzon Caverns stands up and looks the mysterious penguin in the eyes]
Marzon: Come the day when my sword is within the center of your dead soul, let me live now and your life will be at its end sooner than you can imagine...
[The mysterious penguin glares at Marzon and raises his flipper high, then slaps Marzon across the beak, knocking him of the edge of the ship]
???: Your a fool Marzon! Let your body die with your ship and country!
[The mysterious penguin turns to his crew and slowly his grin turns to a grimace]
???: Crew! Set sail to the wretched island ahead. I plan to take its life like all the other nations that stood in my way! Harvest as much penguin blood as you can! Leave none alive!!
[The ship begins to move slowly, lightning strikes lighting up the deadly waves]

[Back on Club Penguin]
Collin: The storm seems to be drawing closer...
[Collins friend Taylor Raymun walks onto the beach and up to Collin]
Taylor: Collin!
Collin: Taylor!...You scared me there...
Taylor: Well you wouldn't have to tell me! You seem nervous, whats up?
Collin: Nervous is right...take a look for yourself...
[Collin hands Taylor the telescope and Taylor looks through it ]
Taylor: My word...
Collin: It looks a bit worse that the normal storms...
Taylor: Storm? Im looking at that pirate ship!
Collin: What?
Taylor: Here...
[Taylor hands back the telescope and Collin takes a look]
Collin: Wow...
Taylor: Do you suppose its something to do with Rockhopper?
Collin: ...Well....I dont know....i dont trust the look of the ship....I just hope when we get there they will be welcoming...
Taylor: What?
Collin: You heard me, where sailing over there to take a look...
Taylor: uh...im not sure..
Collin: Dont be a coward, im not going out there alone...
Taylor: ....Fine....but we will come right back?
Collin: On my life Taylor...
[Collin gripped the telescope in his flippers tight as the two of them gazed out at the small black spec far off in the sea]

Chapter 2-On the ship and in the cabin.

[waves crash across scene, above is the dark sky. Collin and Taylor sit paddling in the row boat, slowly coming up to the ship]
Collin: Its coming up close now!
Taylor: Your crazy Collin! I want to go back NOW!
Collin: No going back now bud, we've come to far!
[Waves crash to the side of the row boat as it slams to the side of the ship]
Taylor: Collin, the boat is retaining water, one more blow like that and we will flip!!
Collin: Look there's a rope hanging from the side of the ship! If he dock up side over there we can climb up!
[A wet, old looking rope hangs from the side of the ship. The row boat moves up side to the rope but one more wave crashes aside the row boat cracking it in half, the two jump out of the boat just in time and grab the rope causing it to sway back and forth]
Taylor: This is madness Collin! I cant take it anymore i want to go back!
Collin: In what Taylor! The boats sunk!
Taylor: oh man this is bad! This is really bad!
[The two carefully climb up the swaying rope, waves crash harder upon the side of the ship]
Collin: Almost there Taylor! Just keep hold!
[Collin climbs over the ships edge followed by Taylor, both wet and tired]
Collin: Looks safe, but keep your voice low...
Taylor: Ok...Say, why dont you take a look at where this things going?
[Collin puts his telescope up to his eye, in the distance is Club Penguins dock]
Collin: Looks like there heading to the dock...
Taylor: Maybe we can hide on here and hop of when it lands...
Collin: Before we start hiding like rats, I want to look around this mangy thing...
Taylor: Fine...but i wan-
[Before Taylor finishes talking, a robed penguin knocks Taylor out with a crate]
Collin: Taylor! What th-
[The robed penguin raises the crate and slams Collin across the beak, knocking him out also...
From Collins eyes- Ship and sky blur, vision falls to the floor, everything goes black]

[From Taylor's eyes- At first theres blur then everything becomes clear.
The two are tied up to a chair in a cabin in the ship, its dark, with the only light being from a small window, standing in front of them is a crew with one penguin in the middle, taller than the others]
???: You boys are lucky we didn't slit your throats and leave the rest to the sharks...
[Collin is still outcold, Taylor is pale and shaking]
Taylor: Whats going on!! Let me go!!
???: Give me one reason to let you go and not break your beak in two...
Taylor: Please no!! I just want to leave!!
???: Your going to answer me some questions boy, if you dont there's a good chance you wont leave my ship alive...
Taylor: Fine fine! I'll tell you what you want!! Just please let me go!!
???: Fine, first. What are you doing on my ship...?
Taylor: It was all Collins idea!! I didn't even want to come!!
???: I suppose the other boy is Collin...Derlin! Wake the boy up!
[Another robed penguin comes out from the crowd with a bucket of water, he splashes it over Collin]
???: Now i want everything this boy knows...
[Collin blinks then gasps for air, then looks around]
Collin: What!? Whats going on!? Who are you!?
???: Boy you dont need to know anything, its what i want to know that's important...
Collin: Im not telling you anything!
Taylor: Collin no!
[Before Taylor finishes talking, the penguin named Derlin comes out of the crowd again and kicks Collin in the stomach, Collin yelps then gasps for breath]
Collin:....What...what do you want...
???: I want to know why your on my ship!
Collin: I...I was curious....
[Derlin Kicks Collin in the side, Collin cries in pain]
???: Curiosity doesn't sound like a good answer! Now tell me you little brat! Why are you here!
Collin: First tell me what your ship is doing sailing towards Club Penguin...
Derlin: I think this boy needs another kick...
???: No...
[The mysterious tall penguin removes the hood of his robe to show his dark, evil grin.]
???: Your a foolish lad...That will lead to your death...
Collin: Tell me why your ship is here...
[Taylor stares at Collin scared and worried...]
???: My name is captain Storm jumper, and my crew and me are here to destroy Club Penguin and Kill every penguin on it, then everything else beyond its mountains....
[Collin and Taylors eyes widen. Lighting strikes brightening up the room, showing Storm jumpers face. On a desk in the corner in the room, the sliver shine of Collins telescope glares across Storm jumpers eyes]

Chapter 3- The grand escape

[Pan back into the cabin, Storm jumper is staring down at Collin, Collins eyes are fixed at the telescope on the desk side, Taylor is still pale and scared]

[Collin looks up at Storm jumper]
Collin: Thats crazy....you cant do that!
Storm jumper: Oh cant i?
[Storm jumper kneeled down so his eyes are matched with Collins]
Storm jumper: Because of me and my crew the islands before this are up in flames, corpses flouting in the waters, and every pathetic penguin that tried to get in my way has there fate with the bottom of the ocean...Now if you want the same i can arrange it...
[Collin grits his teeth and scans the cabin with his eyes, looking over the people in the crew]
Collin: Would you let us go? We wouldn't speech a word for our lives...
Storm jumper: How would i know if you did or didn't?
Collin:....
Storm jumper: I can't let you go...and because Ive told you so much...
[Storm jumper take out a knife and put it up to Collins neck]
Storm jumper: I can't let you leave alive....
Taylor: Stop it!! Stop it now!
[The crew looks over to Taylor, Taylor looks back, his eyes widen]
Storm jumper: Perhaps this lad would like to be first?
[Laughs are heard from the crew]
[Collin looks over the cabin and sees a rope hanging from the ceiling]
Collins thoughts: I can grab that and pull myself out of these ropes....
Taylor: Please no stop!!
[Storm jumper put the knife up to Taylor's neck]
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[Collin leans up, grabs the rope and tugs hard. The ropes on him snap, then with a sudden flash of lightning Collin swings in the air first grabbing the telescope, then kicking Storm jumper. Collin then takes the knife and cuts the ropes on Taylor]
Storm jumper: Get them! Kill them both!!
Collin: Run!!
[Collin and Taylor get up of the ground and run out the cabin door into the rain, the crew follows behind]
Storm jumper: Those wretched fools wont leave this ship alive!!
[Storm jumper climbs up onto a mast and screams commands to his crew]
Storm jumper: Chase them down! Slaughter them!!
[Collin and Taylor run across the deck avoiding the crew members, jumping over crates and barrels, the crew keeps up the chase, jumping at them from all over]
Collin: We need to find a life boat!
Taylor: Over there!
[Taylor points to a hanging boat at the side of the deck, the two of them run towards it]
Storm jumper: There getting away! Get them get them!
[The crew jumps in front of Taylor and Collin, stopping them from getting onto the ship, but in there run Collin slides across the deck floor, pulling Taylor with him, finally the two boys jump up and leap over into the boat]
Taylor: The rope!
[Collin raises the knife and slashes the rope, resulting in the boat dropping into the stormy waters]
Storm jumper: You fools! You let them get away!
[Storm jumper jumps down and run to the side of the ship to see Collin and Taylor sailing away]
Storm jumper: You rats will die! You and your island! Go! Warn your people! It wont help your lethal fate!!
[Collin and Taylor look back from the ship and forward to the cove]
Collin: Too close...
[Taylor looked at Collin hard then punched him across the beak]
Taylor: Why Collin!? Why did you bring me into this! You promised!
[Collin wiped the blood of his beak]
Collin: I promised we would come back...and we got out...and here we are...
Taylor: But....but..
[Taylor's eyes fill with tears]
Taylor: Dont ever bring me into something like that again Collin!
Collin: Its not even over yet Taylor...we need to warn the island of this...
[Taylor and Collin look out over to the cove, waves crash over the beach, rain pelts the water]

Chapter 4- Hope with the migrator

[Rain pelts the sand on the cove, the boat docks onto the side.]
Taylor: Finally...
[Taylor climbs out the boat and walks of]
Collin: Taylor, wait!
[Collin grasps his telescope and runs after Taylor]
Collin: I think the first place we need to go is the pizza parlor.
[Taylor looks around, pauses, then punches Collin across the beak]
Taylor: Collin your on your own! Never pull me into this crap again!
Collin: Taylor...i...
[Taylor runs of in the opposite direction]
Collin: Taylor.....
[Collins eyes fill with tears, he shakes his head then turn back to the forest]
Collin: Fine then...I'll warn the island myself....
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[Camera pan into the pizza parlor doors from the inside, the doors swing open. Rain comes in some as Collin runs in]
Collin: Everyone listen!!
[The people continues eating and such]
Collin: Listen to me!! Pirates are coming and there going to destroy club penguin!!
[Silence comes over the parlor, penguins look up at Collin, then go back to what they where doing. Collins face grows pale]
Collin: Im serious!! Listen to me!!
[At the managers desk]
Manager: *sigh* look kid, do you want some pizza or something?
Collin: You! Listen to me! Tell these people that pirates are coming!!
[The manager gives Collin a look]
Manager: Heh that's pretty funny kid...so do you need anything?
[Collin kicks the desk, then runs out of parlor into the rain]
Collin: They wont listen!

[Collin marches across the plaza and town screaming the same thing over and over, he gets the same outcome]

[Collin runs through the rain into the beach]
Collin: what am i going to do?....
[Collin turns around, lurking above him is rockhoppers ship]
Collin: Rockhopper!
[Collin runs down into the ships hull, sitting are 5 crew members, 2 guarding rockhoppers quarters]
Collin: Listen!
[The men look at Collin, Collin stands quite then opens his beak again to talk]
Collin: Pirates are coming! To attack club penguin! You need to stop them!!
[The men look at him blankly for a moment, then burst into laughter]
Crew member 1: Boy i think youve been out in the rain too long!
Collin: No no no! Listen! He's called storm jumper! and he has a big ship! and he is going to kill everyone!
Crew member 3: You need a head check boy! We checked the seas when we sailed here!
[Collin wipes tears from his eyes and grips his fists]
Collin: What bull! I thought you guys could help!
[The men continue laughing, before the doors behind Collin fly open]
???: I dont think its very funny....
[The men look up at the man that just entered]
[Collin turns around slowly]
Marzon: My name is Marzon! One of the 10 protectors of the southern hemisphere, and what this lad is saying is nothing to be taken lightly! Now tell me you pond scum, where is rockhopper?
Crew member 2: He's...he's out visiting the penguins...we dont know where he is for sure...
Marzon: well then...tell me your names, and maybe you can be of some use...
Crew member 1: I'm Dale
Crew member 3: Parlay
Crew member 2: Toby
[The two guarding the door stand up]
Crew member 4: Jupiter, and he's Saturn.
Saturn: I suppose i dont need to introduce myself now...
[Collin jumps in front of Marzon]
Collin: My names Collin.
[Marzon Looks down at Collin]
Marzon:....How did you know that Storm jumper was coming...
[Collin blinks]
Collin: Me and my friend we on his ship...
Marzon:.....Its surprising your here to tell me that...
Now then! I want all of you to gather some ships, where going to take down storm jumpers crew and stop him from getting anywhere near club penguin!
[the crew all step forward, Collins gives a smile, Marzon turns back and walked out into the rain]

Subject: Re: Through the Telescopes Lens Sat May 24, 2008 11:46 am

good story. cant wait for the rest.

Subject: Re: Through the Telescopes Lens Mon May 26, 2008 5:40 pm

curtis kelly wrote:: good story. cant wait for the rest.

Thanks, I'm still working on chapter two.

Subject: Re: Through the Telescopes Lens Sat May 31, 2008 11:51 am

i like it i cant wait unitl Chapter 2 ! Wink

Subject: Re: Through the Telescopes Lens Sat May 31, 2008 10:18 pm

Just added chapter two. Enjoy =D

Subject: Re: Through the Telescopes Lens Sun Jun 01, 2008 6:09 am

Awsome dude your a good story teller man Wink

Subject: Re: Through the Telescopes Lens Sun Jun 01, 2008 1:02 pm

Thanks Harold. I was surprised with my work myself (Glouting is necessary =P).

Subject: Re: Through the Telescopes Lens Fri Jun 06, 2008 5:07 am

i know like your so good Wink

Subject: Re: Through the Telescopes Lens Fri Jun 06, 2008 9:40 am

The new chapter is up! Hope you like this one.

Subject: Re: Through the Telescopes Lens Sat Jun 07, 2008 10:17 am

Indeed. i do like it Wink

Subject: Re: Through the Telescopes Lens Sat Jun 07, 2008 10:39 am

Harold221 wrote:: Indeed. i do like it

Its a shame your the only one who seems to be keeping up with the story. -__-

Subject: Re: Through the Telescopes Lens Tue Jun 10, 2008 1:21 pm

good story i really thought chapter two was so good i really liked it good job

Subject: Re: Through the Telescopes Lens Tue Jun 10, 2008 1:32 pm

curtis kelly wrote:: good story i really thought chapter two was so good i really liked it good job

Theres a looong adventure ahead for Collin And Taylor, stayed tuned
~~for the next exiting episode of dragon ball Z!!~~
For the rest of the story.

Subject: Re: Through the Telescopes Lens Tue Jun 10, 2008 1:37 pm

ok i will stay tuned

Subject: Re: Through the Telescopes Lens Tue Jun 10, 2008 2:37 pm

i will ~~not~~ stay tuned xD lol i will

Subject: Re: Through the Telescopes Lens Tue Jun 17, 2008 10:37 am

perty good i finally found the time to read it! Happy

good job!

p.s. only 4 more users till we hit 50!!!!!..........!

Subject: Re: Through the Telescopes Lens Tue Jun 17, 2008 12:36 pm

hoagie master the 2nd wrote:: perty good i finally found the time to read it!
good job!

p.s. only 4 more users till we hit 50!!!!!..........!

Now 3 members lol work hard to get some more members guys

Subject: Re: Through the Telescopes Lens Thu Jun 19, 2008 2:02 pm

Thats really cool Bane. Cant wait for the next chapter.

Subject: Re: Through the Telescopes Lens Thu Jun 19, 2008 3:54 pm

lebron jam24 wrote:

hoagie master the 2nd wrote:: perty good i finally found the time to read it!
good job!

p.s. only 4 more users till we hit 50!!!!!..........!

Now 3 members lol work hard to get some more members guys

It would be fun to have 3 more g uint penguins on Happy

Subject: Re: Through the Telescopes Lens Thu Jun 19, 2008 8:40 pm

Chapter 4 is done.